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目前，往往忽略了英文作文实质思想内容的学生的写作英文，聚焦点是英语语言的大量“万能”模板。英语作文模板给出框架格式和英语篇内容的“碎片句”。因此写作也就感觉没有思路，“我”语文太差了。其实，英语写作是需要思路的。怎么能希望有一个“万能”模板呢？把任何一个主题的作文都可以“套住”呢？所以抛开模板学会用自己的思维语言——思考考生已知的论据——表达自己的思想，才是英文写作之“王道”。英语写作如没有实质思想内容，或有文不对题的内容，那么再“漂亮的模板”句子又有什么用呢？语言既是我们思想的载体，又是思维的工具。载体和工具帮助文章内容写得富有灵魂性。这种文章是源于逻辑思维的概念、判断、分析和推理后，才能得到。为此以“Why do you your class to be only in , or in both and ?（你为什么喜欢老师授课时只用英语，还是英汉语兼用呢？）”为题，写一篇英语作文如下。

at , most have in by a who could make him/her in . So do they about it that they in into by and to it. This them with in words and to be put . with this, some , whose rests on weak as a --in- , ask their to give them one in that helps their .

With the of all , the teach them both by means of and of . This is to meet the needs of them, with the in , for short time.

its to spend in , would be to win such great as their makes in hard at them . By their in doing the of from to well, the will teach in use of the way that is to vary, on they are in both and or in .

a goal in them in , the helps them in .

从上述英语作文可以看出：

该篇英语作文完全是思想表达的内容，因此剖析主题的“原因和结果及其分析、推理及其措施”等内容，没有“万能模板”或套作痕迹（如The main is that … , thing we…that is to say, that is, what is more, As we all know,…）占用空间“凑文字数”的无效词句。

因此强调写英语不靠模板靠思维逻辑，所以靠逻辑彰显巨大“威力”。英语写作今日之努力绽放明日希望铸就未来辉煌。为此带给大考考生写作英语增强思想性减少形式性，彰显英语写作应用价值，英语思维逻辑写作勇于接纳学生走向英语写作成功之路！

总结：

上述英语作文，让英语思维写英语之阳光 照射出金光闪烁的英语作文得高分。英语作文写得思想有新鲜感。强调考生在写作中的三种能力：㈠分析能力、㈡推理能力、㈢评论能力，会让学生在日常学习中注重提高自己，帮助立意、构思、成文到修改，都需要用逻辑性思维的“渗透”，显现出英语实际写作水平和能力。用英语思维，学生写作英语作文会有期待的好成绩出现，对英语写作考生产生正面的引导作用。这是源于——精彩高分！分析推理助利考生立意构思，写出“思维功夫”的英语作文——之思路。