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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个雅思观点类大作文的范文和范文详解。

老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

上题：

It is more for to learn about their local than the world . Do you agree or ?

审题：

- Model 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

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Some it is more for to about their own of world , an I with, as I think world holds equal value, and thus, both be given in the in equal .

One of the main why local , and , be in is that can gain a sense of the their has in their lives. A this type of will find it to know their place in the of their , and , the world, a lack of and that . This of local , thus, may in pride, or , a lack of self- as a , but most , can the of .

In with local , , also be about major world and even other and . in a world and one in which can have a on other and , an of and the that these can be of to the and their . This can take the form of and and can allow , once they enter into , to with those in and from .

In , local to can them in a and in a of local ; while at the same time, an equal of time spent on the young about world can help give a more well- of the world, and as such, I that it is more to teach local at the of world .

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- Essay 范文解析 -

- (1)

Some it is more for to about their own of world , an I with, as I think world holds equal value, and thus, both be given in the in equal .

from the / 题目改述:

for the “” type essay 观点类大作文高分句型：

Words (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:

高分地道词汇和短语：

- (2) Body 1 -

that must be to 这段需要提到：

One of the main why local , and , be in is that can gain a sense of the their has in their lives. A this type of will find it to know their place in the of their , and , the world, a lack of and that . This of local , thus, may in pride, or , a lack of self- as a , but most , can the of .

IELTS essay 雅思高频句型：

and 高分地道词汇和短语：

Words [ words, , ] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

- (3) Body 2 -

that must be to 这段需要提到：

In with local , , also be about major world and even other and . in a world and one in which can have a on other and , an of and the that these can be of to the and their . This can take the form of and and can allow , once they enter into , to with those in and from .

IELTS essay 雅思高频句型：

and 高分地道词汇和短语：

Words [ words, , ] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

- (4) -

In with local , , also be about major world and even other and . in a world and one in which can have a on other and , an of and the that these can be of to the and their . This can take the form of and and can allow , once they enter into , to with those in and from .

IELTS essay 雅思高频句型：

and 高分地道词汇和短语：

Words [ words, , ] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：