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通过写出如下英语逻辑作文，来说明何谓“逻辑一条线”写英语作文。就是向读者表明：英语写作者依据逻辑思维规律，在阐述已知写作提示内容中，挖掘出提示句所产生的内在和外在原因及其结果，作出合理判断、推理，以认识客观情况的个性心理品质和本真思考规律，借助“以提示点为中心，左找原因，右找结果”之原理，写出具有独立创造思维价值的英语得高分的作文如下。

Dear my ,

Good !

I, LiJin, feel to a here today on most of your votes in favor of my vice- in Club, where you will grow to be an -. This you will find to in , in the that I will be well for the up to my own with my up-to-date ideas as .

In high team , I it easy to a good with you all as good . I’m good at , to, or , and I will help you with your .

To be able to in with each other, in my , you all my in the Club will be not only to a of once a month where you would have , but to have party once a week to get much in you in , of , not to .

Based on the above told, so would your that you will be kept to in in such a way as this: only by each other’s in into , will you be able to get ready for the place you and from other .

To take up , , you as well as fore-said if in being as for top-6 by in the are to come to be with from other . This will keep you wise in their and set you broad- in reply to all which are done by -party. , to your in , your with would be to make on the above- life in the Club, to my .

I wish my dream could come true about vice- in the Club since I will back in favor with you, who would have in in the Club, I’m sure.

Thank you.

(LiJin given on votes )

以上英语逻辑写作的已知条件是：某大学李津同学，参加英语俱乐部竞选新一届副主席的相关活动，请按以下4项提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿：A. 个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）；B. 组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）；C. 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）；D. 表达竞选的愿望。

同样还是这个已知写作条件，使用模板英语写作得低分作文如下（已标1-13顺序号为便利说明），因为没有遵守“以提示点为中心，左找原因，右找结果”之规则：

Good , my dear .

My name is Li jin. 1 Today I am very glad to have the to run for the vice of the Club. 2 the of vice of the Club, I feel to take the job. 3 First, I have a lot of and wide from my for my job as . 4 , I am a warm- boy and ready to help . 5 Third, I am good at and have held a of and .

6 into the , I will try my best to the and serve my if I am lucky to be the vice . 7 My plan is as : on the one hand, I will some , like " ", a where can show their . 8 In this , we can still learn from each other. 9 And I will some to give for our so that we can a lot of . 10 On the other hand, I will more to the inter- . 11 We can with from other in or . 12 , I will open more for you to voice your and need.

13 I hope you will give me a , and me that I will be a good vice .

Thank you.

与英语逻辑思维写作比较，这个英语模板写作，有13方面需要改进如下：

1竞选原因漏写了“为了向学生提供优质英语服务”和结果漏写“学生参与有魅力的英语活动”；

2原因漏写“你们可能由此认为英语操练会有进步” 和结果漏写“而期望我是合格人选；

3原因句位置及语法有误，应是“in of my ”结果漏写“you will share with me a lot of I have when in ”；

4结果漏写“So it’s easy, I’m sure, for you to with me on ” ；

5结果漏写“to make it for my to each other in ”；

6与“组织校内的活动的设想”关系不大，审题有误，应删除；

7原因漏写“为提高英语水平”；

8是7结果句，因此7、8句可以合并；

9原因漏写“让学生开阔英语眼界”；

10原因漏写“让学生理论联系实际”；

11原因漏写“为应对挑战” 和结果漏写“锻炼语言使用能力”；

12不明确：“发表意见的途径” 即：为什么开一个发表意见的途径？发表什么意见；

13不明确：“给我一个机会” 即：什么机会？为什么相信我是一名杰出的副主席？（因为你们将可以从英语俱乐部在听、说、写英语上受益匪浅）。

从上述英语作文可以看出：

以上1-13点加上原因和结果，即括号内容“以提示点为中心，左找原因，右找结果”规定的或原因或结果句内容，就是英语逻辑思维写英语文了，如开头写的英语作文。

总结：

英语逻辑写作特点是“逻辑一条线”即内容让读者读起来没有“断层”有可信度之感觉，所以操作程序是：通过不同原因相应推出不同结果，作出清晰的判断推理，达到全面分析和解决问题的目的，因此因果是相互衔接的，这与英美人在用英语表达思想中从头到尾都渗透着逻辑，是相吻合的。

非英语为母语的各国家人们在写英语中注意到使用这种因果关联思维方式，不过有时把非英语为母语思维方式带入英语写作中，也是不可避免的。所以倡导逻辑写作英语表达应努力遵循英语逻辑思维规则写作英语。如此英语逻辑写作一不留神得高分儿？

英语模板写作特点是“不是逻辑一条线”即不通过原因相应推出结果，因此没有作出清晰的判断推理，没有达到全面分析和解决问题的目的，因为因果是相互不衔接的，违反“英语是逻辑语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂”之原理。其理由是英语模板写作思路方法采用中文的“形散神不散而跳跃式思维”。如按照1-13点说明的思维写英语就符合英语步步判断和推理，英语写作内容就“逻辑一条线了”。

到此为止，你就完全可以理解并解决了——英语作文：“逻辑一条线”让你一次性学会英语思维写英语得高分——之问题了。